Angel of Death

Wow. I really like this. The rhyme scheme was consistent and for someone who doesn't normally write poetry you did a great here. Well done. :) - Angel

I am currently listening to all the songs, and I now have a lot of fave songs.

OMG!!!! This has seriously made my morning! Wow! Thanks so much Cal.

Bonjour Ash! “Wow, I really wasn’t expecting this. After you practically ran screaming from me in the woods, I finally got the drift that you didn’t care for me . ...

~Edited~ ~Angel

Hey Gal, Thanks for your critique. It was helpful and actually, I agree with you 100% I really didn't put much thought into this poem at first, seeing as I ...

Attention! Ok, I've been taking my time with this novel. Usually, I'd just write and write and write but this time around, I'm just going to work on developing my ...

EllyMelly Hey there! Welcome to YWS and thanks for your critique. I'm really glad you liked it and that you felt that Mar's emotions were believable because others felt that ...

Thanks you two for the critiques! Your writing seems to flow better when there is action and dialogue involved. Hmm? I've always thought it was the other way around, because ...

mizz-iceberg & Esmé Thank you both, so very much for your reviews! Since you both say that I need to show her emotional state, I will try my best to ...

sparkle8744 Wow! It's amazing that I didn't have any grammatical errors because I'm not that really good at grammar but I guess I am. So thanks for pointing that out. ...

Thanks so much Cal! This review was so helpful. Hehe, I type really fast and I must have forget to put the E in Mickey. I was hoping my dialogue ...

Thanks Connie ^_^ I'm glad you like Ronnie. I hardly ever do character developments and I was worried that no one would get the type of person she was. If ...

~ Edited ~ Okay, I finally got around to editing this. Clo thought that you couldn't really get into Ivan's head enough so hopefully the new ending is better. What ...

Wow! Thanks you two! Kat, I'm really glad that you like my work. And Ash, I am speechless. Really, I am. You're an amazing writer and to hear this from ...